Dear Mom, June 23, 1700
I'm off to War for 3 days and I know I'm to young but its worth it, well if you think I'm to young.I'm going to tell you my 3 days that's going to happen. The important people that are going to be there are Thomas Jefferson, George Washington, Thomas Paine who created a booklet called Common Sense, Benjerman Franklin, and King George lll. I feel terrible, scared, and sad because I had to leave home.
Day 1
Today I woke up and thought it was a bright sunny day and reminded myself that the next 2 days I have to fight War. That time I was taking a walk and while I was doing that I found George Washington, Thomas Jefferson, and Thomas Paine. I told them "Where's the rest," he said "They're coming." When I heard marching I turned around and there was Benjerman Franklin and the other people that I didn't know that was going to fight War with me.
Day 2
The next day, I was taking a walk again and I saw King George lll and his crew practicing for the War tomorrow, and that reminded me I'm late cause I'm supposed to practice too at the other side, so I ran and ran unti I got there. We were practicing our aiming and we split our selves up that one side is the good side and the other is the bad side and we rand through like the War was today. It turned dark and I went back to go to sleep, but before I went to sleep I prayed and prayed.
Day 3 Time For War
It was time for War we were getting ready to fight then I said "Don't worry, don't be nervouse cause I'm ready to fight King George lll." So they called out 1.......2........3.......... FIGHT!!!!!!!! So we fighted and fighted til we went through and we stabed a lot of people and when we went through everyone was dead and my team didn't lose but some of our team died.
When I went home my mom huged me tightly and said "If I was hurt but a little scratch on the cheek. THE END
Friday, December 4, 2009
I'm Off To the War Mom
Posted by Lil Diva's Thoughts at 7:13 AM
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1 comments:
Pamela, the assignment was supposed to articulate your days before you go to war, not during the war. However, what you wrote was not bad, just make sure you look at your spelling and grammatical issues. Instead of "we fighted and fighted..." it should be; we fought and fought. 70%
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